Sunday, September 30, 2012

What makes writing great: the day of exclamation points!

Some reading groups: In group of 4-5 rotate around the room and read and discuss the following pieces.

1. Ground Zero: look for sentence patterns. They are amazing in this piece! Read. Learn. Be amazed. Copy at will.
2. Missing the nuance: let's get specific and serious about words.
3. Phantonyms: beware! Be scared.
4. Goodness this is awesome (!) writing.

For each piece, I'd like you answer the following questions:
1. Who is the speaker? Audience? Subject?
2. What is the take-away for your essay writing?
3. What sentence pattern or device did the writer employ that you'd like to steal for your own work?
4. How did the writer engage you in the subject? How did the writer bore you?
5. Discuss anything else you deem necessary before you move on to the next piece.

Your group will spend 15 minutes with each piece and then we'll rotate.

Monday, September 24, 2012

Peer Review of Drafts

You must have your essay read by two classmates! Have each reader fill out the accompanying peer review sheet.

Any questions, comments, concerns, complaints, let me know.

Sunday, September 16, 2012

Day 7

Shooting Dad

  • Vowell employs stereotypes. What are they? How are they helpful? Hurtful?
  • In what way is Vowell's voice defined by her sarcasm?
  • In what way do form and content complement each other?
  • How would you describe her writing style? (think sentences and syntax)


Arm Wrestling with my Father

  • Manning employs stereotypes. What are they? How are they helpful? Hurtful?
  • Manning's affection toward his father changes over the course of the essay. Where in the essay is that change present? (find the sentence/paragraph)
  • What is the purpose of this essay?


Some thoughts from Sara Vowell

1. What was the process behind writing Shooting Dad? Was this essay part of another story or project?
It was originally a radio documentary.  My father and I went up into the mountains and shot off his cannon.  You can probably find it on the This American Life web site on the show called "Guns."  I think the process was: we were doing an hour on the theme of guns and when we were discussing that in the weekly editorial meeting I told everyone my dad had just made his own cannon and so I was dispatched to Montana with a tape recorder.  There really wasn't too much thought behind it--it was more of a hunch.  Seemed like a natural for radio, just because of how loud a cannon is.

2. What did your father think of the essay? Your twin?
I think my dad liked the story but I never asked him.  My family and I don't talk about my work too much.  I think it probably carries over from my family never being too interested in the boring stuff I was obsessed with as a kid, mostly classical music.  Like, I was really into Debussy.  And I'm pretty sure Debussy's parents weren't very interested in Debussy so I can't really blame mine.

3. We're often asked by colleges, "What makes you tick?" What makes you tick?
Colleges ask this?  What makes you tick?  This is not a question that comes up very often in adulthood, unless I am attending the wrong sort of parties.  If the question is what propels my work, I would suppose it's a combination of needing to pay the bills and curiosity about certain topics.  Writing nonfiction, I just latch onto something--one Puritan sermon, a road trip the Marquis de Lafayette made in 1824, the story behind a Hawaiian quilt, etc.--and I just light out from there because I have to know more.  Or, if we're getting more basic, I think the thing that propels nonfiction writers is a love for/fascination with/horror of the world as it is in general and other people in particular.  Or, maybe more to the point, the thing that keeps egging me on is learning.  I'm happy when I'm learning something but I'm happier still when I figure something out after processing something I've learned.

4. How often do you write? And what are you working on now?
How often I write depends on how close I am to a deadline.  If I am within three months of a book deadline, I'm writing writing up to eighteen hours a day seven days a week.  If I've just started researching a book, I can go months before I'm ready to write a single word.  As for right now, I'm trying to decide what my next book will be so I've been researching a couple of ideas.

5. How has your writing voice changed over the course of your career?
I don't think my writing voice has changed all that much.  I might have simplified my style a bit and become a tad less colloquial.  And there's a definite shift from the first person to the third, not that I'll ever completely give up on the first.  I take it from these questions, this class read that essay about my father's cannon.  I bet I haven't written a piece like that for at least ten years--something personal and in the first person.  Right after I made that radio documentary about the cannon I made another documentary about the Cherokee Trail of Tears and fell in love with writing about American history, which is pretty much all I do anymore.  The older I get the less interested I am in myself  I'm also much more guarded about my private life.  That comes from meeting readers and listeners who know things about me from my work.  When I first started telling personal stories on the radio, I was just sitting in a studio by myself and speaking into a microphone.  I never really thought about other people listening.  Mainly though, a huge reason I stopped writing personal essays and started writing books about history is that after I became a writer and finally had control over my life, dramatic things stopped happening to me.  Once I got the congenial, pleasant life I wanted, nothing much happened to me worth writing about so I needed to find drama elsewhere.  Luckily, American history is full of the murder and mayhem sorely lacking in my own life.

ESSAY TOPIC #1
Using the narrative and/or descriptive style of writing, write an essay about the legacy of an object or possession given to you.

Be prepared to identify the elements of the SAS triangle (speaker, audience, subject) and defend your narrative structure. We'll be workshopping these essays in class.

Some inspiration:

"How objects are handed on is all about story-telling. I am giving you this because I love you. Or because it was given to me. Because I bought it somewhere special. Because you will care for it. Because it will complicate your life. Because it will make someone else envious. There is no easy story in legacy. What is remembered and what is forgotten? There can be a chain of forgetting, the rubbing away of previous ownership as much as the slow accretions of stories" (The Hare with Amber Eyes: A Family's Century of Art and Loss, Edmund de Waal — location unknown because it's from a Kindle sample).

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Day 6

Writing
Some basics: The point of the narrative — the idea the read is to take away — then determines the selection of events, the amount of detail devoted to them, and their arrangement. (Compact Reader, 82) Also check out the list on p. 85
  • straight chronological order
  • final event first
  • summarized and then examined
  • flashbacks
  • en media res
Some free-writing: story cubes and one-sentence narratives. Helps us focus on opening lines.

Discussion
The Chase

  • In what ways does Dillard balance the youthful tone with adult reflection? What would happen to the essay if the balance wasn't maintained?
  • What purpose does the man serve? Is he a placeholder, something against which to expose a personal truth?
  • What's the so what of this essay?

Salvation

  • How does Hughes get the reader invested in this essay?
  • What's the so what of this essay?
  • How is Hughes' tone reflective yet his style adolescent?
  • Is Hughes sad that he didn't have a realization or that he let those around him down or that he lied?

Sunday, September 9, 2012

Day 5

1. Fabulous line from your work: share in groups of three and then posted to Socrative (if we can make it work)
2. Read essay on the bucket. Discuss.
3. Narration terms: chronological, en media res, flashbacks.
4. Other important elements of narration (remember ... it's not enough to describe, we must have a purpose, a narrative drive, behind each essay)
5. Let's write some more! Turning one of your paragraphs into a narrative piece.

Friday, September 7, 2012

Day 4

Champion of the World & Desert Dance

Discussion

  • COTW:
    • Favorite sentence. What effect does it have?
    • How does the Angelou draw in her audience?
    • How does she alienate her audience?
    • Angelou is a master at pacing. How does she accomplish this from paragraph to paragraph? Give specific examples.
    • At times, Angelou capitalizes Store and Black. What effect does this have on the narrative? 
    • Look at her verbs!
  • DD:
    • Thesis?
    • Structure of the last line/paragraph. Does this sentence work with or against the content and mood of the paragraph? (classic content and form question)
    • Paragraph #3. Effect of the sentence patterns?

Writing: Write a paragraph describing one subject from each category

  • Person (sight): friend, musician, politician
  • Place (smell): bedroom, vacation spot, vacation spot
  • Thing (touch): photograph, foggy day, childhood toy

Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Day 3

Homework: Love Dropbox. Can you please upload RTF or PDF files. Makes life easier.

Review: objective description, subjective description, dominant impression.

Discussion: My Landlady's Yard & The Santa Ana

  • SAS -- you love it
  • Questions from homewor


Writing: Start on either topic

  • something in or around your home that holds emotional significance for you. Describe the object or space to reveal both its physical attributes and its significance to you.
  • write about something that annoys, frightens or even crazes you and others. Use examples from your own experience


For homework: Champion of the World

For procrastination reading: The Deadly Choices at Memorial